Wednesday, July 20, 2011

HELP PLEASE!!! Need book ideas!!! For Scholarship!! Please HELP.. 5 stars!!!?

I love writing books so I'm defiantly going to help you. (: Okay, well I feel the brother's name should be an average name like Sam or a name that isn't very tough (even though he is a jock). For example, Brock or Tank would be a tough name, but then again that wouldn't really make sense in the story... Any who, the little sister... maybe her name could be a "tougher" name. Not like Lilly or Mary, but Joan (i know it sounds old), Olive (my favorite our of these), or possibly Shelby. The Father's name should be an older one, not one that you hear now a days, but not one that was super duper old. Between the 18th and 19th century. Here are some examples: Gerald, Cornelius (my favorite!), or maybe Richard (I know, its not THAT old haha). So for the girl he falls in love with (Oh my!) I think her name should be an "average" one too, but more stern (you will understand why later). I'm sure you can figure out what the girl's name could be, so I'd better rap this up because it's getting quite long! However, I would like to say my opinion about what will happen next to the boy and girl. I was thinking that the girl could have quite and attitude, but not a very fierce one where she is rude 24/7. One with sarcasm and she kind of always wants her own way. The boy meets her through his sister. Since his sister is blind, she needs a brail tutor (it might be spelled wrong). The girl happens to have a blind brother, younger than she is, and she tutors him when she learned it in.... a club? Idk (somewhere, your smart i bet you could come up with something). The boy notices the girl tutoring his little sister and watches them for a full session and observing how the girl teaches her students. (The girl could be part of a club, like I was saying before, that teaches brail and she goes around and tutors blind children). Now, let me rewind and maybe the boy could "notice" the girl before she comes to his house. The girl could be tutoring ANOTHER one of her students and he takes note of the situation, but doesn't tell his father about the girl. So when he sees her again, he is appalled that she is there and after the girl is done the tutoring she wishes the sister a good night and is about to leave when she turns around and stares at the boy. Of course its an awkward moment, but she says one sentence that turns the boys life around from that moment onward: "How does it feel to lose someone when they are still here?" And that could start a chain reaction of events: the boy asking what she means, the girl explaining, possibly the boy getting annoyed that shes in his personal business... and now you meet the sarcastic personality but she gradually begins to soften up after she learns how the boy coped with the whole mess. Yada, yada, yada.... wow this is long so i hoped i helped!

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